Wednesday, October 5, 2011

response to wiki: https://sites.google.com/site/jerskeyeslfall2011/

After reading wiki by ESL class that about science, society and pocess for " the immortal life of henrietta lacks".  I fond out there have many mistakes that we make.  like word spelling wrong and some sentences did not write in complete sentence.  most of the  group did not write details to support their ideas. i think we should go over the book again and thinking about what we write.  i think my group can make it better. we will add some details to support them, correct the wrong word and  correct the sentences to make them easyer to understand.

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